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Death of a Mortar Lorry and car design from the BFF

Valiance


Posted Sep 28, 2008, 10:40 am
New issue of the Gazette out now.
*goat starer*


Posted Sep 29, 2008, 4:33 pm
did you lose a mortar lorry val? why was I not told?
*sam*


Posted Sep 29, 2008, 5:02 pm
Good reading!
Zoltan


Posted Sep 30, 2008, 12:01 pm
Well done as always Val. Thx
Ivan Kerensky


Posted Sep 30, 2008, 12:16 pm
You didn't talk about the Pick up flying 150 meters away after the Lorry blown up...
*Lugal*


Posted Sep 30, 2008, 2:14 pm
Ivan Kerensky said:
You didn't talk about the Pick up flying 150 meters away after the Lorry blown up...

Quote:
`Concentrate, kid,` said Enrique. `Just that pickup left and then we`re clear.`

The pickup sent another rocket into the inferno, and another. Enrique saw a person, clothes and hair aflame, leap from the truck and roll on the sand.

Enrique flinched as the Viathan disappeared. In its place, a roiling, tumbling cloud of flame and destruction. A dark shape flew overhead with an eerie whine.

`What the..` said Little Ken. `I think the Viathan just exploded.`

`No crap, son. Now where the hell is that pickup.`

`It`s gone. The explosion must have flung it a coupla hundred metres. We`ve won.`


Good write-up, btw.  Nice tribute.
*goat starer*


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 1:29 am
you know... its funny but to read that account you would think the Vanguards were out there on their own..... brevity is all very well but spin is another thing entirely!

I seem to remember there being somebody else there pulling their asses (quite literally) out of the fire.
Mad Mike


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 1:47 am
oh really? were you written out of history like the great emporer of china wrote his enemies out of history?

dont you know you need to tip the gazette writers so they put you in a better light?

and besides, if you were there why did you let the mortar lorry get killed?!?!?!?
Valiance


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 9:43 am
I tried, honestly, but it's a short story with 3 cars and 9 characters in it already. Adding anymore made it impossible to follow.

Honest
ShoeyTheCrazy


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 5:17 pm
Read good nice going Im almost having De-Ja-Vue Hmm I wonder ...
*goat starer*


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 5:34 pm
Valiance said:
I tried, honestly, but it's a short story with 3 cars and 9 characters in it already. Adding anymore made it impossible to follow.

Honest


You may find i decide to rise to that challenge.... problem is i cant really remember what cars i had.
Mad Mike


Posted Oct 1, 2008, 6:14 pm
thats the media for ya, lie by ommission!
*Ayjona*


Posted Nov 11, 2010, 1:41 pm
I can see that the Gazette has become a hotbead of corruption and loose morals in my absence.

A good thing it is such high-quality corruption! Good writing!

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